I think it is a very good watercolour, I really like the mono-tones colours you chose. Minor things need to be fixed (something about the proportions of the face maybe) but I look forward to see your new paintings
Wow, this is a very impressive work! When reading the title, I had to think of the german word "Allüre" which is coming from the french "allure". It has a different meaning, compared to the english one, which is fascination or seduction. In german it means a forced unnatural behaviour, which is coming from the person itself , to appear in a certain way. This painting is representing this meaning for me, because her pose seems to "closed" and distant.